小一作文留念(writings from 1st grade)
轉眼一個學年又過去了。學期結束前幾天,小猴每天都會帶回一些過去一年寫的作業——數學、作文、週記、繪畫…。從一本本佈滿字跡和簡單插畫的作業簿裡,可以清楚看見孩子一年下來學習的痕跡。他的作文從簡單的單字,變到越來越長的句子,拼字的準確度和字跡清晰度上也都進步許多;讓人難以相信,這中間才不過一個學年的時間。週記(Journal)裡紀錄了他對週末的描寫;作文本裡有各種不同的主題:「我喜歡的運動」、「我喜歡的動物」、「我的朋友」,「我」、節慶的簡單描寫、還有老師讓他自由編造的故事。雖然每篇文章都短短的,只有一兩頁(每個週末讀起來都過得很開心);這卻是孩子第一次把對生活的感想和體會,以及想像的世界,完整地用筆寫下來。這一年,無疑是他書寫發展上一個重要的里程碑。我從他的作文簿中挑了幾篇,做為他小一學涯的紀念。
Journal:
1. My weekend was good. On Monday I watched Rio. It was a good move(movie). My favorite part was when the blue birds got put in a cage on the airplane. My real favorite part was when blu lerned(learned) how to fly. It was a good good move(movie). In the end of the move(movie) the two blue birds had babys. I also went to main(Maine) on Saturday. I had a lot of fun in main. On Friday I went to the beach. I had fun there. I even got a toy at a store! It was caled(called) the dark pirtes(pirates) patroll(patrol). I had a lot of fun.
2. On Saturday I went swiming whith(with) my dad. That nigt(night) I fond(found) a “extraordanriy”(extraordinary) white rock. I bought it home. On Sunday I went to soccer. I was on fiere(fire).
Compositions:
It was a warm day. But when I got to Kirk’s tow (two) hoes(house), on the roof of one hose(house) was a SPIDER! It was not small. The SPIder was huge! “Munch Munch!”He ate the hose(house). “The end. ” The spider said.
*Kirk is one of Isaac’s best friends in first grade.
If I were a seed, I’d be a cactus.
I would need one shower a month.
Not the shower a human takes but the drops that come from the sky.
I would be spiky. No one would touch me.
暑假,為蜜蜂而讀(Summer Reading)
星期一放學,蹦跳下了校車,還來不及進屋放下背包,小猴興奮地說:「媽媽,我可以跟你說一件事嗎?」(”Can I tell you something?”是他習慣的起語,不管是學校發生的事,一個笑話或點子,他總這樣引起對方的注意。)
媽媽:「當然(”Of course“是我固定的回答)。」
孩子開始說,今年暑假,如果他讀超過一千頁書,可以免費得到一張進Topsfield Fair的門票。Topsfield是我們北邊的一個鎮,每年秋天都會舉辦盛大的豐收嘉年會,有吃有玩的,總會吸引大量而擁擠的人潮。一聽到跟閱讀有關的事,我的耳朵馬上就豎了起來,問了細節,聽起來像是鎮上每年暑假都會辦Summer Reading活動的圖書館,為了鼓勵學生閱讀,今年特別和Topsfield合辦的一項活動。







Chiuying
是啊!謝謝妳,妙玲!我覺得我們應該認識彼此,但不好意思我不記得。妳是?